On cross country we were all tired of running that we were go to faint but we still cared about running the cross country.On cross country people were so tired congratulation to the people that came first second and third.Well done to the people that did not came 1 2 3 but great job.
Thank you
Hi Jesfalley,
ReplyDeleteI like your images and you descripption but maybe can you please edit you work and fix those mistakes please,
Cheers xoxo
Hi Jesfalley I like your photo and what you was writing about and I like the part when you said
ReplyDeletewe still cared about running and how you said Well done to the people that did not came 1 2 3.
Hey Jess,
ReplyDeleteI like the way you did your cross country photo and some facts about what happend but at the bigging of your sentence it didn't make any sence so next time can you please check you work and ask for a export to proof read your work.
From:Maxine.